Only One

Good day, ladies and gents! Here is the promised first page of my story. I'm excited to present a narrative that could be driven by the viewers themselves. I'll gladly take suggestions and answer questions : )

The main peeps are:
Main Protagonist = Kira 
Best Friend = Bianca
(More will be added as the story progresses.)

    “Wow! Inkopolis is a LOT bigger than I imagined!”

    “Calm down, Kira. I know you’re excited to head straight to turf wars but you can’t go in there looking like that.”

    “Like what?”

    “For one thing, you are still in your farming clothes. Didn’t I tell you to change on the subway ride here?”

    “I thought maybe the smell would drive opponents away…”

The girl named Bianca pointed to the direction of Booyah Base.

    “There is where you need to go to freshen up. Come on, we shouldn’t waste daylight.”

The two girls headed to the most famous shopping mall. Bianca was born and raised in the city so she had a membership. Unlike Kira, who was a farmer in one of the villages, she knew everything about navigating the city and staying fresh. Bianca wasn’t a long time friend of Kira’s but rather a recent acquaintance she met online. She was willing to give up a bedroom for whoever wanted to stay in Inkopolis and Kira gladly obliged.

    “Look, this shirt is your size.”

    “I don’t know, it doesn’t seem my type.”

    “Your type? Do you mean the flannel you always wear is your type?”

    “How do you know I wear flannel all the time?”

    “I looked up your profile on Splatter Book. I make sure my roommates aren’t psychopaths.”

    “Okay...so pick me out an entirely different outfit! I want to experience the city look.”

    “Whatever you say...”

Bianca picked out a leather jacket, white sneakers, and a pair of designer headphones. Kira hesitated before taking the items back to the change room. She came out a different inkling.

    “Um...is this...fresh?”

    “It is for the kids with the right personality. I’m going to hunt for something more your style.”

Bianca searched for the right clothing before presenting it to Kira. She changed once more to discover she liked the new outfit.

    “A red checkered shirt, cream basics, and a paisley bandana really suit you.”

    “Thanks for finding these! They fit really well and are actually comfortable. How much do I owe you?”

    “Nah, I’ll get the bill. It’s a welcoming present from me.”

    “Thank you again! I don’t think I could pay you anyways.”

    “Why? How much did you bring?”

    “All of my savings which comes to about $3000.”

    “That’s all you saved?! Where did the rest go?”

    “Farming can be a harsh life when an unexpected drought occurs…”